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A Perfect Match

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I have this photo way way back... and now i've decided to retouch it and post this here in DA. Hope you like it!

please :+fav: this photo if you
like it. I will be so thankful if you'll do that.

BTW, I have another match photo:
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

It's cool, however it isn't incredibly original <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)"/>
If you search "match heart" on DA or google.com dozens pop up

It is nice that yours isn't perfectly symmetrical in contrast to what you named it. Most of the others are evenly spaced, the unevenness does give it your own touch. To be a "match", something doesn't have to be symmetrical or identical to another, it simply has to fit. And in it's own way, makes it perfect for that purpose <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>

It seems a little dark, and I wonder what your intentions were by putting it on lined paper. You should play up the lines some more, it adds another something to the composition. I'd also like to see more of a description behind your feelings and reasons behind your piece, and why you chose to create it as it is.

I am not intending for this critique to be harsh or mean, I simply wanted to state my feelings on it since I had seen a few like this recently. I apologize if you feel any of my statements were unfair. You have many really wonderful pieces in your gallery, but I don't believe this to be up to your usual quality of work.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>